Hello, Bolt! This is Silver, your assistant!
Thank you for sharing your presentation in my Monday Euphony Class
I'd like to give you several comments in the hope of your great improvements!
First of all, congratulations for being the best presenter of August!
Pronunciation
1. I was surprised at your great performance!
2. go[l]d, a[ll] : Your [l] sound is generally weak.
3. exclaimed, lifted, occurred, collected, moved, replied, greatly : Ending sound is weak
4. kindn[e]ss, husb[a]nd : Here the sound of [e] and [a] are close to [ㅓ]
*Giving Away a Fortune : Delivering the title of the story is really important! Keep it in mind ^^
Accent & Intonation
-With amazing memorization, you delivered the whole story very fluently.
However, as we talked in the class, you have your own intonation.
Also, you tend to make several unclear sounds in each sentence. (ex. clear away, proper thing....)
If you add accuracy to your sounds, it would be far better ^^
Manner
-I figured out that you tend to hold your chin up high on the stage.
-Intro is interesting enough to draw people's attention from the very first.
<Mission>
-Make clear ending sound
If you have any questions, you can contact me anytime in Moojuk ^^
Do not let your talent and time go to waste. Let's be an indispensable player!