Re: 2/09이유건

[Teacher1]

Caillou played a with Gilbert.
Then caillou Caillou had a snack time.
Finish After the snack time, Caillou played with Gilbert again.
But gilbert dont see Gilbert was gone.
So cailou finding a gilbert Caillou looked for Gilbert.
Finally, Caillou finded found a gilbert Gilbert, so he played very happily again.

Score: C-

Tips)

1. "Caillou played a Gilbert." → "Caillou played with Gilbert."
   👉 "play" 동사는 "with"과 함께 써야 해요!
2. "Then caillou has a snack time." → "Then Caillou had a snack time."
   👉 이름은 대문자로 써야 하고, 과거형 "had"를 써야 해요!
3. "Finish the snack time" → "After the snack time"
   👉 "Finish" 대신 "After"를 써야 자연스러워요!
4. "gilbert dont see" → "Gilbert was gone."
   👉 "don't see"는 어색한 표현이에요. "was gone"이 더 적절해요!
5. "cailou finding a gilbert" → "Caillou looked for Gilbert."
   👉 과거형 "looked for"를 사용해야 해요!
6. "finded a gilbert" → "found Gilbert"
   👉 "finded"는 틀린 단어예요. 올바른 과거형은 "found"예요!
7. "played very funny again" → "played very happily again"
   👉 "funny"는 "웃긴"이라는 뜻이고, "happily"가 "즐겁게"라는 의미로 맞아요!