HelloSandy. This
is Charley`s Friday Euphony class
First of all, I
feel highly honored by seeing your presentation three time in a row in my
class.
Thank you for sharing your presentation with me and other
students.
Your endless endeavor and ceaseless effort on English always
give inspiration on me.
Please keep attending Euphony class and show your exemplary
attitude to the others.
For the most
part, your performance was sinfully indulgent. To be more charming, let me give
you some pointers as follows.
1.
Pronunciation (Access to http://www.merriam-webster.com/ and check it out)
I think
when it comes to enunciation was good. However, there was some room to revise.
So please listen carefully and correct your words.
Wa[shes]
up
War-to[rn]:
/r/ sound is a bit weak.
tra[v]eled:
/v/ sound is a bit incorrect.
[sh]ore:
/sh/ sound is a bit incorrect
2.
Accent & Intonation
Your sound
has been picked it up, however, there is a few room to spare. Please keep
listening audio file.
Anyway, I
firmly believed that with your humble self-effacing spirityou would reach a
consummate level. Thank you for showing your tremendously remarkable
improvement. Keep your momentum on going.
3.
Voice (+ Manner)
I think
because of your enormous effort on this presentation, performance was awash
with highly regarded quality. However, as I mentioned earlier, if you spare the
room with projecting voice well, It may be the viable candidate of the best
presenter and I firmly believe that it could be feasible.
4.
Mission
1.Emulating sound with
audio file like a doppelganger.