Sydney-andrew: Why do
we need to go to school??|
Every day, we wake up and eat our breakfast. After our breakfast, we
go to school but lots of kids don't know why do we need to go to school. Well,
why do we need to go to school? I will tell you why we need to go to
school by telling three reasons.
First, we go to school to study. People mostly stay at school and
study. You learn to go to school. Second, You go to school to make friends.
Think of you staying in your house by yourself,alone. Your neighbor are
all your age. but you can't talk to him. In this situation, you can talk to him
at school. Than you will have lots of fun time at your school and you can play
after school together. Third, Can use time usefully. If you sleep for half of
your day, than your life is going to be useful. so if you go to school, than
you can use your life and time useful.
Many people think that going to school is just for study. but they are
wrong. You go to school to use your life in better ways.
Every day, we wake up and eat our breakfast. After
our breakfast, we go to school but lots of kids don't know why we need to go to
school. Well, why do we need to go to school? I will tell you why we need
to go to school by telling three reasons.
First, we go to school to study. People mostly
stay at school and study. You learn a lot of information and other things when
you go to school. Second, you go to school to make friends. Think of you
staying in your house by yourself, alone. Your neighbors are all at your
age but you can't talk to them. In this situation, you can talk to them at
school. Then you will have lots of fun time at your school and you can play
after school together. Third, you can use your time wisely. If you sleep for
half of your day, then your life is going to be purposeful so if you go to
school, then you can maximize your life and your time.
Many people think that going to school is just
for study but they are wrong. You go to school to use your life in better ways.
Hi Andrew!!!
Very Good writing today!!
Keep it up and use this for enhancing your writing skills. Anyway, I corrected
some words so please check it out. Don’t use (than but then) and avoid putting
period when it’s not yet period and don’t capitalize the letter if it’s not
necessary. I added some words to make your sentences clearer and I changed some
so please look at it. Good luck!!!