Today's story title is "Caillou Tidies His Toys." Caillou has a lot of toys. One day, Caillou is hide in hid among many dolls. between. And Caillou's mom is saw it And suggest eat saw him and suggested eating chocolate pudding. And Caillou is went to kitchen with his mom to eat pudding. But When going to kitchen, His mom is saw a Caillou was mess in stairs. Caillou went to the kitchen with his mom to eat pudding. But on the way to the kitchen, his mom saw a mess on the stairs.
So, Caillou and his mom cleaned stairs and go to kitchen. So, Caillou and his mom cleaned the stairs and then went to the kitchen. But His dad said "Clean the bath room." so Caillou feel upset. And finished clean,Caillou is eat a chocolate pudding feel is happy! But his dad said, "Clean the bathroom," so Caillou felt upset. After finishing the cleaning, Caillou ate the chocolate pudding and felt happy!
Grade: B
Tips:
- Ensure proper verb tenses for clarity.
- Use proper punctuation and spacing.
- Make sure all sentences are complete and grammatically correct.
- Combine shorter sentences for smoother reading.