Matilda Novel
CHAPTER 15: THE SECOND MIRACLE
ORIGINAL ENTRY: 170-176
Matilda did not go out and said to Miss Honey to have a talk and she told that she made the glass of water to tip with her eyes. Matilda showed that surprise thing to her teacher Miss Honey. She whispered ‘Tip!Tip!’. When the glass of water was tip on Miss Honeys desk. Then miss honey was so surprised. Miss Honey said that she never saw a child clever as Matilda. Matilda said to the teacher to not be too expelled. The teacher asked to go to her cottage and have tea and have a talk with the teacher.Then Miss Honey led Matilda to her cottage.
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FINAL ENTRY WITH CORRECTIONS;
Matilda did not go out right away after the class was dismissed. She wanted to have a talk with Miss Honey and she thinks that she can trust her.
She told her that she made the glass of water to tip with her eyes. At first Miss Honey thought that Matilda was just imagining things like usual kids do; although she was talking to her patiently.
Matilda showed that surprise thing to her teacher Miss Honey. She whispered ‘Tip!Tip!’. When the glass of water was tip on Miss Honeys desk. Then miss honey was so surprised. Miss Honey said that she never saw a child clever as Matilda.
Matilda went back to her seat and concentrated on moving the glass of water on Miss Honey’s table. The glass wobbled and tilted then it toppled right over and fell.
Miss Honey was so shocked. She looked at Matilda and asked her if she’s fine. The latter said she is. Matilda’s teacher decided to invite her in her cottage after she had gathered herself from being awestruck.
Hey Roni!
Your summary is good although too short but it goes way better than before though.
Keep it up!
Teacher Nina