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<p>2024년 9월 9일 10:00 2차시 수업 및 등단자 축하식</p><p> </p><p><b>1. 사과(대상)을 바라보는 10가지 태도</b></p><p>   - 시를 보면 분위기가 나와야 한다</p><p>   - 시는 개성이 있다 =>똑같이 쓰면 안된다. 자신만의 이미지 창출</p><p>   - 3요소가 반드시 어울려야 한다</p><p>   <b>[시의 3요소</b>] 회화성(영상) 이미지, 음악성(리듬), 의미성(교훈, 철학성)</p><p> </p><p><b>2. 혼자</b></p><div class="figure-img" data-ke-type="image" data-ke-style="alignLeft" data-ke-mobilestyle="widthOrigin"><img src="https://t1.daumcdn.net/cafeattach/1L7zP/fe3371adf3906b81ba83a3ae4dfb1be87d418749" class="txc-image" width="381" data-img-src="https://t1.daumcdn.net/cafeattach/1L7zP/fe3371adf3906b81ba83a3ae4dfb1be87d418749" data-origin-width="1357" data-origin-height="772"></div><p>   -시는 설명하지 않음. 이미지를 보여줌. 수학처럼 떨어지지 않음. 어렵게 쓰지 않음</p><p>   -음수율 - 글자수를 가지고 리듬을 조성</p><p>   - 남의 시를 많이 읽으면서 내 시의 세계를 구축해 나가야 함</p><p> </p><p><b>3. 나팔꽃 / 정호승</b></p><p>   - 생활시</p><p>   - 긍정적, 상상력</p><p>   - 독자수용미학 - 설명 안함. 독자가 다양하게 읽엇 받아들이는 것</p><p> </p><p><b>4. 나팔꽃 / 문복희</b></p><p>   - 시조, 신앙시. 철학적, 종교적</p><p>   - 주님의 얼굴. 절망. 고난. 고해성사. 회개. 하나님과 나의 관계정리. 예수그리스도의 영상</p><p>   - 진실(자신의 경험)이 담겨있는 상상(재현)을 쓰는 것이 시다.</p><p>   - 있었던 일을 쓰는 것은 기사</p><p>   - 자기 스타일로 쓰라</p><p>   -多讀,多作, 多商量</p><p> </p><p><b><쉼터></b></p><p>교육의 목적은 비어있는 머리를 열려있는 머리로 바꾸는 것이다  /말콤 포브스(1919~1990)</p><p>   - 열려야 시가 된다. 닫힌 곳에 집어 넣으면 찢어진다. 열려야 시가 넉넉해 진다.</p><p> </p><div class="imagegridblock" data-ke-type="imageGrid"><div class="image-container"><span data-url="https://t1.daumcdn.net/cafeattach/1L7zP/a2e4b5c391d0541a42de6a3b38f4739bd0edac80" data-origin-width="901" data-origin-height="1455" style="width:25.86%; 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margin-right: 10px;"><img src="https://t1.daumcdn.net/cafeattach/1L7zP/8bc959367d48b981c10fb9c47c7c03202b22115a" class="txc-image-grid"></span><span data-url="https://t1.daumcdn.net/cafeattach/1L7zP/33322fe79403d50259a37639fba0e20e83c87023" data-origin-width="1485" data-origin-height="792" style="width:52.10%; "><img src="https://t1.daumcdn.net/cafeattach/1L7zP/33322fe79403d50259a37639fba0e20e83c87023" class="txc-image-grid"></span></div></div><p>선물 증정식                                                                                                   오늘 모임 인증샷 총 10 명 출석입니다</p><div class="imagegridblock" data-ke-type="imageGrid"><div class="image-container"><span data-url="https://t1.daumcdn.net/cafeattach/1L7zP/a54e211212f6c50cb90785a1d775166697a05969" data-origin-width="1533" data-origin-height="1016" style="width:30.00%; margin-right: 10px;"><img src="https://t1.daumcdn.net/cafeattach/1L7zP/a54e211212f6c50cb90785a1d775166697a05969" class="txc-image-grid"></span><span data-url="https://t1.daumcdn.net/cafeattach/1L7zP/21e070f85be5e691386d86abef3b61bf2ca795a7" data-origin-width="1420" data-origin-height="751" style="width:37.60%; margin-right: 10px;"><img src="https://t1.daumcdn.net/cafeattach/1L7zP/21e070f85be5e691386d86abef3b61bf2ca795a7" class="txc-image-grid"></span><span data-url="https://t1.daumcdn.net/cafeattach/1L7zP/499cd1a4db3096fd0a9ef5d0964241290e20f9c1" data-origin-width="1489" data-origin-height="914" style="width:32.40%; "><img src="https://t1.daumcdn.net/cafeattach/1L7zP/499cd1a4db3096fd0a9ef5d0964241290e20f9c1" class="txc-image-grid"></span></div></div><p>화백문학 81호(한영선), 화백문학 82호(이성덕, 임성수) 등단을 축하드립니다.</p><p>함께 하지 못한 최인자님의 수필 등단도 축하드립니다.</p><p>등단 축하 행사로 시창작반 문우들이 개인 화분1개씩과 케익나눔을 했습니다. </p><p>맛있는 점심식사(차이나 스푼)와 후식 커피및 도넛은 등단시인들께서 계산하셨습니다.  더불어 유익한 시간이었습니다.</p><p>점점 더 풍성해지는 가천시창작반을 기대합니다.</p><p> </p>