<p>Today I saw Jadoo.</p><p><s>In Jadoo's school came transform student.</s> 𝗔 𝗻𝗲𝘄 𝘀𝘁𝘂𝗱𝗲𝗻𝘁 𝗰𝗮𝗺𝗲 𝘁𝗼 𝗝𝗮𝗱𝗼𝗼’𝘀 𝘀𝗰𝗵𝗼𝗼𝗹.</p><p>He <s>invented</s> 𝗶𝗻𝘃𝗶𝘁𝗲𝗱 Jadoo to his home.</p><p>They went <b>to</b> school to find another snail.</p><p><s>Yoonsok</s> 𝗬𝗼𝗼𝗻𝘀𝗲𝗼𝗸 and <s>Sanghoon were fight</s> 𝗦𝗲𝗼𝗻𝗴𝗵𝘂𝗻 𝗳𝗼𝘂𝗴𝗵𝘁.</p><p>Finally, they <s>were friend</s> 𝗯𝗲𝗰𝗮𝗺𝗲 𝗳𝗿𝗶𝗲𝗻𝗱𝘀.</p><p>I think this story was fun!</p><p>Score: A-</p><p>Tips)<br>• “transfer student”는 “전학생”이라는 뜻이에요.<br>• “invite”는 “초대하다”, “invent”는 “발명하다”라는 뜻이에요.<br>• “fight”의 과거형은 “fought”예요.<br>• 마지막에 두 친구가 어떻게 다시 친해졌는지 한 문장 더 쓰면 더 좋아요!</p>
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