Re: 1c 58 Bella

[Teacher3]

The book's tittle title of this book is "Red Riding Hood." Red Riding Hood was going to visit her grandma. Along the way, a bad wolf wa was hiding. He is was hungry. The wolf sprinted to grandma's house and get got her pyjamas pajamas. Red Riding Hood arrived at her grandma's house. The wolf said**,** "Come closer, my dear girl**.** " And The wolf was getting very hungry and started licking his lips. When Then the forest ranger was walking by outside. So The ranger wolf locked the wolf in a cage at the zoo.

Score: B

Tips)

1. 시제를 맞춰주세요! ('was', 'got'처럼 과거형으로 써요)
2. 'And'로 문장을 시작하지 말아요! (새로운 문장으로 시작하세요)
3. 할머니는 어떻게 되었나요? (자세히 설명해보세요)
4. 늑대는 어떻게 빨간 모자를 속였나요? (자세히 써보면 좋겠어요)
5. 숲 속으로 가기 전에 엄마는 무슨 말씀을 하셨나요? (경고의 말씀을 써보세요)