The title of the book is "A sSpecial rReport from Billy Redcloud." Billy was upset because he had to explain why there were days and nights in the science report, but he couldn't go to the library. Instead, Billy's father told Billy an Indian story. One old day long ago, the Earth was new, when the Earth was new, rabbit Rabbit said that needed there was a need for more light there. But the owl Owl said there was enough light. So Rabbit decided to discuss this problem with other animals. Some animals were on the side of the rabbit Rabbit, but other animals were on the side of owls Owl. Rabbits Rabbit and the owls Owl started to fight, but they made a big mistake. Finally, in today's world, there are days and nights. The next day, Billy told this story in science class gladly happily. I want to know other Indian stories, too.
Score: B+
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- 대문자 사용: 문장의 첫 글자와 이름은 항상 대문자로 써요.
- 시제 일치: 과거 이야기를 할 때는 과거형 동사를 사용해요.
- 단수와 복수: 동물 이름이 하나일 때는 단수로, 여러 마리일 때는 복수로 써요.
- 이야기 구조: 시작, 중간, 끝 부분이 잘 연결되도록 해요.
- 새로운 단어: '기쁘게(gladly)' 대신 '행복하게(happily)'처럼 쉬운 단어를 써보세요.