The title of this book is "Choosing a Pet." This story's main characters are William and his Grandfather**, a pet** owner store owner. " William gets has $14.3 30. So, William buys wants to buy his a pet. First, William saw monkeys, but he didn't choose them because they were so too messy. And Then he went to see the turtles and goldfish, but he didn't choose them either. Mr. Gage recommended mice, but that's they were not easy to choose. Next, he went go to the front of the Rabbit's house cage and Kitten's house cage. William feels thought they were cute, but they raise to not easy were not easy to raise. Lastly, William looked around. However, Suddenly, some puppies came to the front of William and held tugged at his sleeve. So, William's feel is felt so happy. And So he chooses chose a puppy!! He imagined because taking rake a walk and throwing throw the ball**,** and the puppy held bringing this and front me it back to him, everything imagined happy. I think this story is so interesting because I like some animals and my pet is something somewhat the same. So, I compared some sections. Thank you.
Score: B-
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