Hello, Ann! This is Aiden!!^_^
Thank you for your priceless time for this presentation
in my Friday Euphony class.
I was deeply moved by your desire to practice with
unparalleled efforts.
Every experience in here will play a pivotal role in
bringing huge improvements to fruition.
keep your momentum going please!
For your better performance, I’d like to give you
constructive feedbacks on your presentation.
Pronunciation(you can check the accurate
pronunciation here! www.m-w.com)
-p[o]licy: It sounds close to [ㅏ]
rather than [ㅗ]
-pol[i]cy: It sounds close to [ㅓ]
rather than [ㅣ]
-lev[e]l: It sounds close to [ㅓ]
rather than [ㅔ]
Ending sound
-Good!
Accent & Intonation
- Great Ann!
Hearing your well-trained pronunciation I could figure out how much effort you
did put into practice and listening. Amazing! Keep your momentum going! Based
on sound file, in terms of mimicking sound, you did excellent work. The only
thing I hope you add on your performance is more strong accent.^^
Voice & Manner
- If you make more
powerful and energetic sound, I'm sure that you would make a successful version
of presentation next time. Lastly, smile Ann!^^
Mission
1. Energetic voice and powerful accent^^
If you have any questions, feel free to contact and ask me please
^ ^
첫댓글 Aiden~Thank you very much^^