<p>저저번시간 요약인데 늦었지만 올려볼꼐요. 한번 체크 부탁드려요... <span style="font-family: 'Gill Sans'; line-height: normal; font-size: 13px; "> </span></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Gill Sans'; line-height: normal; font-size: 13px; "><br></span></p><p><span style="font-family: 'Gill Sans'; line-height: normal; font-size: 13px; ">Against Learned Helplessness</span></p>
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<p style="margin: 0.0px 0.0px 0.0px 0.0px; font: 13.0px 'Gill Sans'"><span style="letter-spacing: 0.0px">Unemployment in western world become a serious issue. Some nations in Europe are even worse. People want to have a job but most of available positions are part-time or work that does not requires any skills. Government and decision makers who should have solve this problem are abdicating responsibility and providing reasons why they are not able to give the clear solution. The report from O.E.C.D is not able to give big help right away. Even US Government do not have room for the resolution. However, there are things that government still can do. The biggest problem that worsen the economy is mortgage debt. Reducing debt of citizens and running the national program to make jobs for them will be able to reduce the burden of citizens. </span></p>
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첫댓글예전보다 많이 개선되었는데 조금 더 신경써야 할 small things들이 있죠. 시제: become--> becomes, does not requires--> does not require, should have solve--> should have solved, do not have have --> does not have room,등 관사: U.S. government --> the U.S. government, the resolution--> resolution
첫댓글 예전보다 많이 개선되었는데 조금 더 신경써야 할 small things들이 있죠.
시제: become--> becomes, does not requires--> does not require, should have solve--> should have solved, do not have have --> does not have room,등
관사: U.S. government --> the U.S. government, the resolution--> resolution