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Kids Diary & Essay My essay about the Origin & events about robots
문건호(5-2) 추천 0 조회 117 10.05.27 21:33 댓글 9
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  • 10.05.28 22:47

    첫댓글 I am afraid of robots! I read in the news that they are making a robot that will teach English, and soon you won't need an American English teacher! @.@

    I'm going to give you a few tips for your writing ^^

    When you write the name of a book, you should use big letters for the first letter of every long word. You should say, "the Steel Cave."

    And, you said, "but except." You don't need to use the word "but."

    Great essay! I really liked it. I really liked the photos you added too^^

  • 작성자 10.05.29 13:43

    Thank you for praising and reading my essay.
    Also, thank you for teaching some grammer errors.
    I will try harder study English!

  • 10.05.29 00:37

    참잘했어요...건호씨~~ 흐흐흐

  • 작성자 10.05.29 13:43

    감사합니다, 강민이이모 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

  • 10.05.31 19:14

    Wow~~ It is a wonderful essay~!
    I want to ask you something...
    There was a Humanoid in the Movie 'Matrix'?
    Oh my, I think I have to watch the movie 'Matrix' again!!!
    Thank you for writing a good essay for us. ^^
    I got to know new informations!

  • 작성자 10.05.31 23:14

    I think it is Humanoid, also I heard to someone else.
    The bad people who get energy from humans' dreams are the humanoids.
    You would know the scene the people bend his stomach oppositely, he is the humanoid.
    He is trying to destroy the humans, and humans such as Neo and Trinity are fighting against them.
    But, you can't find it, they are exactly same with humans.
    Thank you for reading mine!

  • 10.05.31 22:52

    I showed this to the people in my class at Dankook. They were very impressed ^^

  • 작성자 10.05.31 23:13

    Thank you for showing you Dankook university's classmates.
    I also impressed and happy because of you.
    Thank you for leading our class very interesting!

  • 10.05.31 23:53

    Humanoid having human characteristics? Oh my~~ even human nature? How could you know about that? What should we prepare? I will just believe scientist all over the world 에고에고 무서워라....

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