Re: Read it summary Joy

[Teacher Winget]

The book's title is "Elephants and Mammoths."

The main character characters are elephants and mammoths.

The both Elephant and Mommoths Both elephants and mammoths are enormous animals.

The two species descend from the same descended from the same ancestor.

Over time, their bodies adapted.

Today, mammoths are extinct.

And the mammoths place warm and mammoth is hard to hunt food Mammoths lived in cold places, making it hard for them to find food.

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Score: B

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Tips):

1. 문법과 표현:

   • "Mommoths" → "mammoths" (철자 수정).
   • "The both Elephant and Mommoths" → "Both elephants and mammoths" (더 자연스러운 문장).
   • "descend from the same" → "descended from the same ancestor" (문장 완성).
   • "And the mammoths place warm and mammoth is hard to hunt food" → "Mammoths lived in cold places, making it hard for them to find food." (의미 명확히 수정).

2. 내용 추가하기:

   • 코끼리와 매머드가 어떻게 적응했는지, 또는 두 종 사이의 차이를 추가하면 더 흥미로운 내용이 될 수 있습니다.

3. 문장 연결:

   • 문장을 더 부드럽게 연결하기 위해 "Additionally," "However," 같은 연결어를 사용해 보세요.