Re:Car seatbelts(2016.2.18) from ken to t.Ediza

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Title: Car seatbelts

 car seatbelts is very important. There is 3 reason.

There are three reasons why car seatbelt is very important.

The first reason is that, if the car will suddenly stop and you didn`t buckle the seatbelts, you will bump against the forwards seat. So it is too dangerous.

                                   forward seats

The second reason is, you will be arrested or you must pay a large amount of money. Of course peoples don`t like be arrested or pay money.

people don’t like to be arrested or pay an amount of money.

So it means if you don`t buckle the seatbelts, it is not good to he or she self.

                       It is not good for you and it’s a violation.                          

The third reason is that, the seatbelts will be no meaning and you will forgot to buckle the seatbelts. This means that person will never buckle seatbelts and finally they will be arrested. From now on, I will buckle seatbelts always. 

The third reason is that, when you forgot to buckle up the seatbelts you will have a violation and be arrested. So from now on, I will buckle seatbelts always.

Comment:

Ken thank you for trying your best to make this writing well and keep it up. Your idea was really great, but next time please be careful with your grammar, don’t forget to use preposition if it is needed and also the arrangement of your sentences because there are some of your sentences that are redundant as well as the usage of capital and small letters.