Re: Read it Unit 2-Noah

[Teacher Winget]

The title of this this book is Is your diet hurting the planet?
I was thinking again reconsidering how my diet is global environment impact impacts the global environment.
I learn learned that processing meat is cause of causes greenhouse gases.
And I agree to that a vegetarian diet is contribute to protection contributes to the protection of the environment.
I was knowing knew a vegetarian diet is good for healthy health and the environment, and I come came to know this more concretely through this book.
I will reduce eating meats my meat consumption.

Score: B

Tips:

1. 동사의 시제: "I learn" 대신 "I learned"
2. 자연스러운 문장: "thinking again diet" 대신 "reconsidering how my diet"
3. 표현 수정: "is cause of" 대신 "causes"
4. 자연스러운 연결: "contribute to protection" 대신 "contributes to the protection"
5. 표현 간결화: "I was knowing" 대신 "I knew"
6. 자연스러운 문장: "eating meats" 대신 "my meat consumption"