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<td width=291 valign=top class="Normal"> <p align="center" style='line-height:14.0pt; font-weight: bold;'><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>Your writing</span></p></td>
<td width=291 valign=top class="Normal"> <p align="center" style='line-height:14.0pt; font-weight: bold;'><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'>My corrections</span></p></td>
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<td width=291 valign=top class="Normal"> <p style='line-height:14.0pt;'><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;
color:black'>I have had a pink eye since the middle of October. <br>
The day I got a problem was very windy .... in late Fall. <br>
I felt someting into my eye from the air.... It hurt me ... <br>
but I didn't go to see a doctor after that. <br>
I think I should have done that as soon as possible... <br>
Today I changed the clinic ... It was my 5times to visit the clinic.. <br>
The doctor said to me.. I should visit here for several days... <br>
Going to the clinic is bothering me....</span></p></td>
<td width=291 valign=top class="Normal"> <p style='line-height:14.0pt;'><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial;
color:black'>I have had a pink eye since the middle of October. <br>
The day I got <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:jim"
datetime="2003-12-02T10:40">the</ins></span><span class=msoDel><del
cite="mailto:jim" datetime="2003-12-02T10:40">a</del></span> problem was <span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:jim" datetime="2003-12-02T10:40">a </ins></span>very windy <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:jim" datetime="2003-12-02T10:40">day</ins></span>.... in late Fall. <br>
I felt somet<span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:jim"
datetime="2003-12-02T10:40">h</ins></span>ing <span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:jim" datetime="2003-12-02T10:40">go </ins></span>into my eye from the air.... It hurt me ... <br>
but I didn't go to <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:jim"
datetime="2003-12-02T10:40">see </del></span>a doctor after that. <br>
I think I should have done that as soon as possible... <br>
Today I changed the clinic ... It was my 5<sup><span class=msoChangeProp><span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:jim" datetime="2003-12-02T10:41"><span class=msoChangeProp>th</span></ins></span></span></sup><span
class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:jim" datetime="2003-12-02T10:41"> </ins></span>times <span class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:jim" datetime="2003-12-02T10:41">to</del></span> visit<span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:jim" datetime="2003-12-02T10:41">ing</ins></span> the clinic.. <br>
The doctor said to me.. I should <span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:jim"
datetime="2003-12-02T10:41">have </ins></span>visit<span class=msoIns><ins
cite="mailto:jim" datetime="2003-12-02T10:41">ed</ins></span> here <span
class=msoDel><del cite="mailto:jim" datetime="2003-12-02T10:41">for</del></span> several days<span class=msoIns><ins cite="mailto:jim"
datetime="2003-12-02T10:41"> earlier</ins></span>... <br>
Going to the clinic is bothering me....</span></p></td>
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<td width=581 colspan=2 valign=top class="Normal"> <p style='line-height:14.0pt;'><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'><strong>Comment:</strong> Excellent writing. Keep it up!</span></p>
<p style='line-height:14.0pt;'><span
style='font-size:11.0pt;font-family:Arial'><strong>Personal comment:</strong> You have had the pink eyes since the middle of October? Wow, does it usually last this long? I hope you will be okay soon. </span></p></td>
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