Re: Read It (Logan)

[Teacher Winget]

Greenhouse gases is are a major cause of global warming. Over 25 percent of all greenhouse gases come from our food.

Eating meat less less meat is not only good at maintaining good for maintaining our healthy body but also important for the environment.

First reason is that farm animals, such as cows, realease release large amounts of gases as they digest food.

Second reason is that raising a livestock takes a lot of land, fertilizer, and grain to feed.

We don't have to be a vegan, but how about going meatless from time to time?

You can make a big impact on the world by making a small change to your diet.

Score: B+

Tips:

1. 동사와 주어의 일치: "Greenhouse gases is" 대신 "Greenhouse gases are"
2. 전치사의 사용: "good at maintaining" 대신 "good for maintaining"
3. 단어 철자: "realease" 대신 "release"
4. 불필요한 관사 삭제: "raising a livestock" 대신 "raising livestock"