Re: Jadoo Lina

[Teacher Winget]

This story is 𝘄𝗮𝘀 about Jadoo and her friends.

Jadu 𝗝𝗮𝗱𝗼𝗼 and her friends went to Jadoo's grandmother's house and ended up returning in a carriage 𝗯𝘆 𝘁𝗿𝗮𝗶𝗻.

But at that time, Jadoo met two strange people alone 𝗼𝗻 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘁𝗿𝗮𝗶𝗻.

And all the lights on the train went out, and ghosts appeared, putting Jadoo and her friends in danger.

After that, Jadoo and her friends safely escaped.

At that time 𝗟𝗮𝘁𝗲𝗿, Jadoo learned that the people she had seen alone on the train had died.

This story seems 𝘄𝗮𝘀 very interesting.

Score: A+

Tips)
• 이름의 철자를 똑같이 써요: “Jadoo.”
• 기차를 타고 돌아왔을 때는 “returned by train”이라고 써요.
• “Later”는 “나중에”라는 뜻으로 이야기의 마지막 부분을 연결할 때 좋아요.
• 무서운 일이 일어난 순서와 마지막 반전까지 아주 자세하게 잘 썼어요!