The story’s title is "Caillou Tidies His Toys."
One day, play Caillou played hide and seek with his mom, but he is adores adores chocolate pudding. Cailliou like his toy because lay in the stair Caillou likes his toys, but they are scattered on the stairs. and he eat chocolate pudding at a moment his Dad come He was about to eat chocolate pudding when his dad came. he will clean the garden because he’s toys but his toys lay anywhere His dad told him to clean up the garden because his toys were lying everywhere. Finally, he is eating ate chocolate pudding and make toy box with his Dad and made a toy box with his dad.
l think it’s story is funny I think this story is funny.
Grade: B
Tips:
- Use the correct verb tense: Change "play" to "played" and "is adores" to "adores.
- Use Correct verb forms: Change "he eat" to "he was about to eat" and "is eating" to "ate."
- Ensure subject-verb agreement: Change "he will clean the garden because he’s toys" to "His dad told him to clean up the garden because his toys were lying everywhere."
- Combine shorter sentences: Instead of "and make toy box with his Dad," use "and made a toy box with his dad."