The title of this story is "Max’s Halloween."
Today is Halloween, so Max and Ruby were reading getting ready for Halloween. Ruby wanted to dress up Max prince as a prince, because Ruby will dress up was going to dress up as Cinderella. But Max wanted to dress up Vampire as a vampire.
Now its it’s time to go to the treat or trick trick or treating. Ruby think thought Max dress up was dressed up as a little prince. But Max dress up dressed up as a vampire. Ruby go went to their grandma’s house then they said and they said “trick or treat!” Sp So they have a had a fun time. I like this story . Because, at the end Max because at the end, Max and grandma dress up same Vampire Grandma were dressed up as the same vampire.
Grade: B
Tips:
- Ensure verb tenses are correct and consistent.
- Use correct article usage ("as a prince," "as a vampire").
- Ensure clarity in sentences ("getting ready" instead of "reading").
- Correct small errors in spelling and grammar.