<p><s>Clementine's visited a Caillou's house.</s> <b>Clementine visited Caillou's house.</b><br>Clementine brought lots of toys. Caillou<br>wanted to play <b>with</b> dinosaurs with Clementine. But Clementine <s>plays</s> <b>played</b> <s>a</s> <b>with a</b><br>teddy bear and bunny. Caillou didn't like<br>anybody touching his teddy and bunny.<br><s>Caillou's don't want</s> <b>Caillou didn't want</b> to play with Clementine anymore. So, Caillou's <s>mom</s> <b>Mom</b><br><s>help</s> <b>helped</b> him. Caillou and Clementine, <s>funny play</s> <b>played fun games</b>.</p><p><b>Score: B</b></p><hr data-ke-style="style1"><p><b>Tips)</b></p><ul style="list-style-type: disc;" data-ke-list-type="disc"><li>"Clementine's visited"는 과거니까 "visited"만 써야 해요.</li><li>"a Caillou's house"는 "a"를 빼고 "Caillou's house"만 써야 자연스러워요.</li><li>"plays"는 과거니까 "played"로 써야 해요.</li><li>"Caillou's don't want"는 "didn't want"으로 바꿔야 해요.</li><li>"help"는 과거형 "helped"로 써야 해요.</li><li>마지막 문장은 "played fun games"나 "played together happily"처럼 문장으로 써주면 더 좋아요.</li><li>Caillou의 감정이나 생각을 한 문장 더 써 보면 이야기가 더 풍부해져요!</li></ul>
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