This story was about A Freaky Railway.
First, Jadoo and her friends visited her grandmother.
Then, they did a game 𝗽𝗹𝗮𝘆𝗲𝗱 𝗮 𝗴𝗮𝗺𝗲, and Jadoo lost at the game.
Next, Jadoo want 𝘄𝗮𝗻𝘁𝗲𝗱 a banana milk, and someone gave for Jadoo 𝗴𝗮𝘃𝗲 𝗼𝗻𝗲 𝘁𝗼 𝗵𝗲𝗿.
Then, Jadoo's friends met ghosts.
In the end, they got off at 𝘁𝗵𝗲 train, and they read a newspaper. and ghosts were missing people. 𝗧𝗵𝗲𝘆 𝗹𝗲𝗮𝗿𝗻𝗲𝗱 𝘁𝗵𝗮𝘁 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗴𝗵𝗼𝘀𝘁𝘀 𝘄𝗲𝗿𝗲 𝗽𝗲𝗼𝗽𝗹𝗲 𝘄𝗵𝗼 𝗵𝗮𝗱 𝗱𝗶𝗲𝗱.
I think this story was fun.
Score: A
Tips)
• “play a game”은 “게임을 하다”라는 뜻이에요.
• 과거 이야기이므로 “want”는 “wanted”로 써요.
• “give something to someone”은 “누구에게 무엇을 주다”라는 뜻이에요.
• First, Then, Next, In the end를 사용해서 무서운 이야기의 순서를 잘 정리했어요!