[한샘 면접답변] 한샘 면접답변 첨삭 요청드립니다.

<div> [기업명 면접답변]기업명 면접답변 첨삭 요청드립니다.   *자동양식에 맞추어 지원회사명/직무명/지원구분 입력하기 <table class="MsoTableGrid" style="border: currentColor; border-collapse: collapse; mso-border-alt: solid windowtext .5pt; mso-yfti-tbllook: 1184; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt; mso-border-insideh: .5pt solid #BFBFBF; mso-border-insideh-themecolor: background1; mso-border-insideh-themeshade: 191; mso-border-insidev: .5pt solid #BFBFBF; mso-border-insidev-themecolor: background1; mso-border-insidev-themeshade: 191;" border="1" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr style="mso-yfti-irow: 0; mso-yfti-firstrow: yes;"><td width="301" valign="top" style="border-width: 1pt; border-style: solid; border-color: windowtext rgb(191, 191, 191) rgb(191, 191, 191) windowtext; padding: 0cm 5.4pt; width: 225.4pt; background-color: transparent; mso-border-bottom-themecolor: background1; mso-border-bottom-themeshade: 191; mso-border-right-themecolor: background1; mso-border-right-themeshade: 191; mso-border-top-alt: windowtext; mso-border-left-alt: windowtext; mso-border-bottom-alt: #BFBFBF; mso-border-right-alt: #BFBFBF; mso-border-style-alt: solid; mso-border-width-alt: .5pt;"> 지원 회사명 </td><td width="301" valign="top" style="border-width: 1pt 1pt 1pt 0px; border-style: solid solid solid none; border-color: windowtext windowtext rgb(191, 191, 191) rgb(0, 0, 0); padding: 0cm 5.4pt; width: 225.4pt; background-color: transparent; mso-border-bottom-themecolor: background1; mso-border-bottom-themeshade: 191; mso-border-top-alt: windowtext; mso-border-left-alt: #BFBFBF; mso-border-bottom-alt: #BFBFBF; mso-border-right-alt: windowtext; mso-border-style-alt: solid; mso-border-width-alt: .5pt; mso-border-left-themecolor: background1; mso-border-left-themeshade: 191;"> 이케아 </td></tr><tr style="mso-yfti-irow: 1;"><td width="301" valign="top" style="border-width: 0px 1pt 1pt; border-style: none solid solid; border-color: rgb(0, 0, 0) rgb(191, 191, 191) rgb(191, 191, 191) windowtext; padding: 0cm 5.4pt; width: 225.4pt; background-color: transparent; mso-border-alt: solid #BFBFBF .5pt; mso-border-bottom-themecolor: background1; mso-border-bottom-themeshade: 191; mso-border-right-themecolor: background1; mso-border-right-themeshade: 191; mso-border-top-alt: solid #BFBFBF .5pt; mso-border-left-alt: solid windowtext .5pt; mso-border-top-themecolor: background1; mso-border-top-themeshade: 191; mso-border-themecolor: background1; mso-border-themeshade: 191;"> 지원 직무명 </td><td width="301" valign="top" style="border-width: 0px 1pt 1pt 0px; border-style: none solid solid none; border-color: rgb(0, 0, 0) windowtext rgb(191, 191, 191) rgb(0, 0, 0); padding: 0cm 5.4pt; width: 225.4pt; background-color: transparent; mso-border-alt: solid #BFBFBF .5pt; mso-border-bottom-themecolor: background1; mso-border-bottom-themeshade: 191; mso-border-top-alt: solid #BFBFBF .5pt; mso-border-left-alt: solid #BFBFBF .5pt; mso-border-right-alt: solid windowtext .5pt; mso-border-left-themecolor: background1; mso-border-left-themeshade: 191; mso-border-top-themecolor: background1; mso-border-top-themeshade: 191; mso-border-themecolor: background1; mso-border-themeshade: 191;"> 경영지원 </td></tr><tr style="mso-yfti-irow: 2; mso-yfti-lastrow: yes;"><td width="301" valign="top" style="border-width: 0px 1pt 1pt; border-style: none solid solid; border-color: rgb(0, 0, 0) rgb(191, 191, 191) windowtext windowtext; padding: 0cm 5.4pt; width: 225.4pt; background-color: transparent; mso-border-right-themecolor: background1; mso-border-right-themeshade: 191; mso-border-top-alt: #BFBFBF; mso-border-left-alt: windowtext; mso-border-bottom-alt: windowtext; mso-border-right-alt: #BFBFBF; mso-border-style-alt: solid; mso-border-width-alt: .5pt; mso-border-top-themecolor: background1; mso-border-top-themeshade: 191;"> 지원 구분(고졸/초대졸/대졸/인턴/경력) </td><td width="301" valign="top" style="border-width: 0px 1pt 1pt 0px; border-style: none solid solid none; border-color: rgb(0, 0, 0) windowtext windowtext rgb(0, 0, 0); padding: 0cm 5.4pt; width: 225.4pt; background-color: transparent; mso-border-top-alt: #BFBFBF; mso-border-left-alt: #BFBFBF; mso-border-bottom-alt: windowtext; mso-border-right-alt: windowtext; mso-border-style-alt: solid; mso-border-width-alt: .5pt; mso-border-left-themecolor: background1; mso-border-left-themeshade: 191; mso-border-top-themecolor: background1; mso-border-top-themeshade: 191;"> 대졸신입 </td></tr></tbody></table>   *면접 질문 입력하기 <table class="MsoTableGrid" style="border: currentColor; border-collapse: collapse; mso-border-alt: solid windowtext .5pt; mso-yfti-tbllook: 1184; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;" border="1" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr style="height: 152pt; mso-yfti-irow: 0; mso-yfti-firstrow: yes; mso-yfti-lastrow: yes;"><td width="601" valign="top" style="padding: 0cm 5.4pt; border: 1pt solid windowtext; width: 450.8pt; height: 152pt; background-color: transparent; mso-border-alt: solid windowtext .5pt;">  최근 우리회사의 경쟁사가 어딘지 알고 있습니까? </td></tr></tbody></table>   *면접 답변 입력하기 <table class="MsoTableGrid" style="border: currentColor; border-collapse: collapse; mso-border-alt: solid windowtext .5pt; mso-yfti-tbllook: 1184; mso-padding-alt: 0cm 5.4pt 0cm 5.4pt;" border="1" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="0"><tbody><tr style="height: 152pt; mso-yfti-irow: 0; mso-yfti-firstrow: yes; mso-yfti-lastrow: yes;"><td width="601" valign="top" style="padding: 0cm 5.4pt; border: 1pt solid windowtext; width: 450.8pt; height: 152pt; background-color: transparent; mso-border-alt: solid windowtext .5pt;">   한샘의 경쟁사는 단연 이케아입니다. 혹자들은 이케아가 국내 시장을 점령할 것이라고 하지만 저는 그렇게 생각하지 않습니다. 고급스러운 디자인과 뛰어난 AS 등으로 소비자들의 마음 속에 들어가 있는 한샘의 자리를 이케아가 차지하는 것은 그리 쉬운 일이 아닐 것입니다.오히려 경쟁사의 등장이 한샘에게는 자극제가 되어 한 층 더 성장할 수 있는 아주 좋은 계기가 될 것입니다. </td></tr></tbody></table>   <center> <img src="https://img1.daumcdn.net/relay/cafe/original/?fname=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.chippo.co.kr%2Fchippo%2Fosing%2F0319_01.png" border="0" vspace="0" hspace="0" usemap="#Map"> <map name="Map"> <area href="http://www.chippostudy.com/SubView/22938" shape="rect" coords="2,3,197,62" target="_blank"> </map> <img src="https://img1.daumcdn.net/relay/cafe/original/?fname=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.chippo.co.kr%2Fchippo%2Fosing%2F0319_02.png" border="0" vspace="0" hspace="0" usemap="#Map2"> <map name="Map2"> <area href="http://cafe.daum.net/_c21_/bbs_list?grpid=GDlO&fldid=2xqF" shape="rect" coords="4,3,192,60" target="_blank"> </map> <img src="https://img1.daumcdn.net/relay/cafe/original/?fname=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.chippo.co.kr%2Fchippo%2Fosing%2F0319_03.png" border="0" vspace="0" hspace="0" usemap="#Map3"> <map name="Map3"> <area href="http://cafe.daum.net/_c21_/bbs_list?grpid=GDlO&mgrpid=&fldid=CXG7" shape="rect" coords="4,3,195,62" target="_blank"> </map> <img src="https://img1.daumcdn.net/relay/cafe/original/?fname=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.chippo.co.kr%2Fchippo%2Fosing%2F0319_04.png" border="0" vspace="0" hspace="0" usemap="#Map4"> <map name="Map4"> <area href="http://cafe.daum.net/_c21_/bbs_list?grpid=GDlO&fldid=8SdF" shape="rect" coords="6,3,195,59" target="_blank"> </map> <img src="https://img1.daumcdn.net/relay/cafe/original/?fname=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.chippo.co.kr%2Fchippo%2Fosing%2F0319_05.png" border="0" vspace="0" hspace="0" usemap="#Map5"> <map name="Map5"> <area href="http://cafe.daum.net/_c21_/bbs_list?grpid=GDlO&fldid=3sr3" shape="rect" coords="8,2,194,59" target="_blank"> </map> <img src="https://img1.daumcdn.net/relay/cafe/original/?fname=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.chippo.co.kr%2Fchippo%2Fosing%2F0319_06.png" border="0" vspace="0" hspace="0" usemap="#Map6"> <map name="Map6"> <area href="http://cafe.daum.net/_c21_/bbs_list?grpid=GDlO&fldid=YRx" shape="rect" coords="6,3,195,60" target="_blank"> </map> <img src="https://img1.daumcdn.net/relay/cafe/original/?fname=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.chippo.co.kr%2Fchippo%2Fosing%2F0319_07.png" border="0" vspace="0" hspace="0" usemap="#Map7"> <map name="Map7"> <area href="http://cafe.daum.net/_c21_/bbs_list?grpid=GDlO&mgrpid=&fldid=NSSV" shape="rect" coords="3,2,196,61" target="_blank"> </map> <img src="https://img1.daumcdn.net/relay/cafe/original/?fname=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.chippo.co.kr%2Fchippo%2Fosing%2F0319_08.png" border="0" vspace="0" hspace="0" usemap="#Map8"> <map name="Map8"> <area href="http://plus.kakao.com/home/@%EC%B7%A8%EC%97%85%EB%BD%80%EA%B0%9C%EA%B8%B0" shape="rect" coords="4,2,194,61" target="_blank"> </map> <img src="https://img1.daumcdn.net/relay/cafe/original/?fname=http%3A%2F%2Fimg.chippo.co.kr%2Fchippo%2Fosing%2F0319_09.png" border="0" vspace="0" hspace="0" usemap="#Map9"> <map name="Map9"> <area href="https://www.facebook.com/breakjob2002" shape="rect" coords="6,3,194,60" target="_blank"> </map> <center></center></center></div>