5 Sentences I (Leo) prepared.

[Leo 레오]

At first, I organized 5 sentences without AI I want to speak fluently during last our call. And I asked the AI to check and revise my sentence more naturally and closer to native speakers.

<Original Phrased I organized first - Bad examples>

1.
상대가 남자이냐, 여자이냐가 문제가 아니라, 공동의 건전한 목적이 있는지가 중요한 것 같아요.
I believe it's not important whether my partner is man or woman but really main point is that we should sound and healthful object in common.

2.
우리처럼 영어공부를 목적으로 한다던가, 등산, 독서 등 많은 건전한 목적이 있잖아요. 건전한 공동의 목표가 있다면 상대가 남자이든 여자이든 무슨 상관이겠어요?
Many sound goals in common don't make any problem such as English like us and hiking, reading books and so on. Who cares whether you are woman or man?

3. 
통화가 끝나면 이력서와 경력기술서를 최종적으로 다듬을 생각이에요. 그리고 내일 아침에 제가 원하는, 인증사업과 관련된 회사에 이력서를 제출할 생각이에요.
After our call is over, I'm gonna go over my resume and check againg my job description. And I will apply to a company I want to go which is about certification business tomorrow morning


4. 혹시 기회가 되면 역할놀이를 통해 제 모의면접을 도와주셔도 재미있을 것 같아요. 당신은 면접관으로써, 나는 지원자로써요. 공격적이고 까다로운 압박질문들을 미리 연습해 보고 싶어요.
And do you mind helping my practice for interview as a role play? You will play as a interviewer, I as a interviewee. I want to practice to respond to aggresive and sharp questions.


5. 근데 자세하고 깊은 이야기는 우선 서류합격이 된 후에 얘기해도 늦지 않겠죠.  지금은 제가 너무 설레발 치는 것 같아요. 푸하하.
By the way preciser and deeper conversation would be good after I will pass the paper application. Now is too early. haha.

<Revised Version after cheching by AI>

1.
상대가 남자이냐, 여자이냐가 문제가 아니라, 공동의 건전한 목적이 있는지가 중요한 것 같아요.

2.
우리처럼 영어공부를 목적으로 한다던가, 등산, 독서 등 많은 건전한 목적이 있잖아요. 건전한 공동의 목표가 있다면 상대가 남자이든 여자이든 무슨 상관이겠어요?

3. 
통화가 끝나면 이력서와 경력기술서를 최종적으로 다듬을 생각이에요. 그리고 내일 아침에 제가 원하는, 인증사업과 관련된 회사에 이력서를 제출할 생각이에요.

4. 혹시 기회가 되면 역할놀이를 통해 제 모의면접을 도와주셔도 재미있을 것 같아요. 당신은 면접관으로써, 나는 지원자로써요. 공격적이고 까다로운 압박질문들을 미리 연습해 보고 싶어요.

5. 근데 자세하고 깊은 이야기는 우선 서류합격이 된 후에 얘기해도 늦지 않겠죠.  지금은 제가 너무 설레발 치는 것 같아요. 푸하하.


1.
I believe it doesn’t matter whether my partner is a man or a woman. What really matters is having a shared, meaningful goal.

2.
There are so many wholesome shared goals—like studying English, hiking, reading, and so on. If we have a good purpose in common, who cares if my partner is male or female?

3.
Once our call ends, I’m going to polish up my resume and revise my career statement one last time. Tomorrow morning, I plan to apply to a company I’m really interested in—it's in the certification business.

4.
If the chance comes up, I think it’d be fun to practice a mock interview through role play. You can act as the interviewer, and I’ll be the applicant. I’d love to rehearse how to handle tough and challenging questions in advance.

5
By the way, I think we can save the detailed and deeper talk for after I pass the document screening.
I’m probably getting ahead of myself right now. Haha.

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And the examples below is just for fun or rasing our instict reading and thinking process like a native.

(It is not involved with our practice. See just as your fun.)

1️⃣

I believe it doesn’t matter whether my partner is a man or a woman. What really matters is having a shared, meaningful goal.
⟶ 나는 믿는다 / 중요하지 않다고 / 내 파트너가 / 남자든 여자든.
진짜로 중요한 것은 / 가지는 것이다 / 함께하는, 의미 있는 목표를.

2️⃣

There are so many wholesome shared goals—like studying English, hiking, reading, and so on. If we have a good purpose in common, who cares if my partner is male or female?
⟶ 존재한다 / 매우 많은 / 건전한 공동의 목적들이—예를 들면 / 영어 공부하기, 등산하기, 책 읽기 등.
만약 우리가 / 좋은 목적을 / 공유하고 있다면 / 누가 신경 쓰겠는가 / 내 파트너가 / 남자인지 여자인지?

3️⃣

Once our call ends, I’m going to polish up my resume and revise my career statement one last time. Tomorrow morning, I plan to apply to a company I’m really interested in—it's in the certification business.
⟶ 일단 / 우리의 통화가 / 끝나면 / 나는 할 예정이다 / 다듬는 것을 / 나의 이력서를 / 그리고 수정하는 것을 / 나의 경력 기술서를 / 마지막 한 번 더.
내일 아침에 / 나는 계획한다 / 지원하는 것을 / 한 회사에 / 내가 정말 관심 있는—그 회사는 / 있다 / 인증 사업 분야에.

4️⃣

If the chance comes up, I think it’d be fun to practice a mock interview through role play. You can act as the interviewer, and I’ll be the applicant. I’d love to rehearse how to handle tough and challenging questions in advance.
⟶ 만약 / 기회가 생기면 / 나는 생각한다 / 재미있을 거라고 / 연습하는 것이 / 모의면접을 / 역할극을 통해서.
너는 맡을 수 있다 / 면접관 역할을, 그리고 나는 / 될 것이다 / 지원자 역할을.
나는 정말 연습하고 싶다 / 어떻게 대응하는지 / 어려운 질문들과 까다로운 질문들에 / 미리.

5️⃣

By the way, I think we can save the detailed and deeper talk for after I pass the document screening. I’m probably getting ahead of myself right now. Haha.
⟶ 그런데 / 나는 생각한다 / 우리가 아껴둘 수 있다고 / 더 자세하고 깊은 이야기를 / 내가 서류 심사를 통과한 이후로.
나는 아마 / 너무 앞서가고 있을 거다 / 지금. 푸하하.

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