For the past few
decades, it has been generally argued on whether or not SNS, Social Network
Services, gives benefits to people. Some people might insist that SNS give
people negative influences in terms of people getting addicted to SNS and being
exposed to useless information often posted on their or their friend’s SNS account; nevertheless, other
people might think that SNS is greatly beneficial to people because it allows
them to contact with each other in a short time no matter where they are.
However, I think that SNS give more positive effects than negative effects.
Actually, I have some reasons to support my idea which I will explain and
develop as specifically as I can in the next following paragraphs:
communication
To begin with, SNS
allows people to communicate with one another by just posting their status and
sharing their ideas. Through globalization, the world is rapidly becoming a
mammoth network. Official language, English, is being used to communicate in
official meetings such as the G20, and in national groups such as the United
Nations (UN). Furthermore, individuals in one part of the world can contact
another person in the other side of the world by just clicking on a button. SNS
offers contact in many ways such as images, videos, live chatting, live video
chatting, status updates and sharing. Through all these methods, it is possible
for the world to view and share trendy fashion as well as thoughts that makes
the whole world a lot similar to each other. Some people might argue that media
such as the news, magazines or radio carried the role to spreading information
from the past until today and also insist that they are the most efficient ways
to spread words. Nevertheless, it is not a hard thing to notice that internet
has grown to be the fastest network that our world have ever experienced and
thanks to the development of smart phones, viewing information on the net has
suddenly accelerated. In my case, I keep in touch with my friends across the
sea through one of many SNS called Facebook. It is a very unique SNS that
provides contact and relation with other people by showing friends of a user’s registered friends that the users
might know.
To continue with,
SNS is an effective way to share ideas. On the web, we can post our own ideas
and insistence of a phenomenon or political situation. All the fields including
politics, economy, culture and even entertainment are all becoming integrated
to each other and furthermore, through globalization, all of them are becoming
closely related with other countries. In politics, politicians such as Sung Jae
Gi (1967, 08 08~ 2013, 07, xx), who was the leader of the United Men, often
used SNS such as Twitter as a means of spreading his words through updating his
status, sharing links of videos, posting his own videos or even images. In
economy fields, many companies advertise their products to all the users using
particular SNS sites with comparatively less money than on air. Actually, I had
bought some useful products advertised in Facebook. Psy, a singer from Korea
who became famous because of Gangnam Style, made use of You Tube and became
popular even without noticing. Yet, some people might disagree with my idea
since they consider SNS as a way of threatening information to spread. They maintain
that explicit materials are shared and posted by users without any limits.
However, it is not a hard thing to figure out that online polices work hard to
arrest the people who posted harmful information and they block threats as soon
as they find it. Consequently, SNS is a safe way to share our ideas and obtain
information.
As a conclusion, SNS can be used not only for communicating
with people but also for sharing ideas with the world. Through its rapid
internet base, people can easily talk and share their current situation from
another part of the world and anyone can post his or her ideas on SNS to make a
better world. As long as the internet polices exist, I am strongly convinced
that SNS is a useful means of communicating and sharing ideas.
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