Then Caillou then ran to the kitchen to eat chocolate pudding it. As I he was going to the kitchen, my his mom asked me him if I told you to put the toys on the stairs and told me to put them away he had put the toys on the stairs away and told me him to do so. Caillou put away the toys and ran back to the kitchen. When I he was about to eat chocolate pudding, my his dad told me him not to leave toys in front of the car or in the bathroom. So Caillou puts put everything away and enjoys enjoyed the chocolate pudding, and the story ends. When I read this story, I thought Caillou was a kid who didn't put his toys away and loved chocolate pudding.
Grade: B
Tips:
- Use the correct pronouns: Change "I" to "he" and "me" to "him."
- Use proper capitalization: "She" to "she."
- Correct verb tense: Change "puts" to "put" and "enjoys" to "enjoyed."