The title of this story is Max's Halloween.
The main characters are Ruby and Max.
While Ruby dress up herself dresses up as Cinderella to go to her grandmother's for Halloween, Max wants to dress up as a vampire, but Ruby repeatedly asks Max to dress up as a little prince. Then Louise, dress dressed up as Rapunzel, come comes and allows Max to dress up as a vampire. Then I go to my grandmother's house and she is also dress up as a vampire.
Grade: B
Tips:
- Ensure subject-verb agreement ("dresses" instead of "dress").
- Correct spelling and grammar errors ("Louise" instead of "Louis").
- Maintain consistency in verb tenses ("comes" instead of "come").
- The last sentence needs clarity. It's unclear who "I" refers to; make sure all characters are clearly identified.