Re: Caillou-kyle

[Teacher Winget]

Caillou Looks for Gilbert

Caillou like play liked playing with Gilbert.

Caillou ate the his breakfast.

Caillou want wanted to play with Gilbert.

Caillou is finding was looking for Gilbert because Gilbert is was hiding.

Caillou's mom help helped him.

Caillou rook looked around the rooms.

Caillou think his like dinosaur listen thought Gilbert might be near the dinosaur toy.

Finally, Caillou found Gilbert. I think this story is interesting.

Score: B+

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Tips):

1. 문법과 표현:

   • "like play" → "liked playing" (과거 시제 및 동명사 사용).
   • "want" → "wanted" (과거 시제).
   • "is finding" → "was looking for" (더 자연스러운 표현).
   • "rook" → "looked" (철자 오류 수정).
   • "think his like dinosaur listen" → "thought Gilbert might be near the dinosaur toy" (의미 명확히 수정).

2. 내용 추가하기:

   • Caillou가 단서를 찾는 과정에서의 감정이나 상황을 더 묘사하면 좋습니다.
   • 엄마와의 대화나 추가적인 행동을 추가하면 이야기의 생동감이 더해질 수 있습니다.