This story was about Trick or Trick Bears 𝗧𝗿𝗶𝗰𝗸 𝗼𝗿 𝗧𝗿𝗲𝗮𝘁!
Bears and sister's daddy wearer a pumpkin. 𝗕𝗿𝗼𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿 𝗕𝗲𝗮𝗿 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗦𝗶𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝗕𝗲𝗮𝗿’𝘀 𝗱𝗮𝗱 𝘄𝗼𝗿𝗲 𝗮 𝗽𝘂𝗺𝗽𝗸𝗶𝗻 𝗰𝗼𝘀𝘁𝘂𝗺𝗲.
Bears and sister and friend meet different friend. 𝗕𝗿𝗼𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿 𝗕𝗲𝗮𝗿, 𝗦𝗶𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝗕𝗲𝗮𝗿, 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗶𝗿 𝗳𝗿𝗶𝗲𝗻𝗱𝘀 𝗺𝗲𝘁 𝗼𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿 𝗳𝗿𝗶𝗲𝗻𝗱𝘀.
And they fight 𝗳𝗼𝘂𝗴𝗵𝘁.
Bears and sister and friend 𝗕𝗿𝗼𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗿 𝗕𝗲𝗮𝗿, 𝗦𝗶𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗿 𝗕𝗲𝗮𝗿, 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝘁𝗵𝗲𝗶𝗿 𝗳𝗿𝗶𝗲𝗻𝗱𝘀 went tothe wich 𝘁𝗼 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝘄𝗶𝘁𝗰𝗵’𝘀 𝗵𝗼𝘂𝘀𝗲.
But the wich 𝘄𝗶𝘁𝗰𝗵 was a nice grandma.
I think this story was fun.
Score: B+
Tips)
• “wear”의 과거형은 “wore”, “fight”의 과거형은 “fought”예요.
• “witch”는 “마녀”라는 뜻이에요. 철자를 잘 기억해요.
• 여러 명을 말할 때는 “their friends”라고 써요.
• 누가 무엇을 했는지 조금 더 정확하게 쓰면 이야기가 더 이해하기 쉬워져요!