Rewriting(Lauren)

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Is an advertisement helpful or harmful for consumers?Some people say advertisements are harmful to the customers.Because, they gives us an impulsive buying.However, I think advertisements gives us happy virus.Do you know fun advertisement?There are some advertisements which show us fun images or video.The effect of fun advertisements is to attract peoples' attention.So they can make people to buy their products.Next, the advertisements can move peoples' minds.I heard it from one woman. She has a disease however, she watched a handicaped person in an advertisement who is trying his best in the race.So, she was moved by that person in that advertisement.Advertisements can moved peoples' mind.And also it can encourage those who are in trouble.In conclusion, I think advertisements are helpful to us to makes people laugh or to attract peoples' attention