Re: Caillou Isabella

[Teacher Winget]

The book's title is "Caillou's Missing Sock."

Caillou wear wore his favorite socks.

But Caillou find found only one.

The other one was gone.

So Caillou go went to the laundry room, but it wasn't here wasn't there.

Caillou go went to the another another room.

The door didn't open.

Caillou call called Dad.

Caillou and Dad finding searched for the sock, and the door didn't open again.

They call called Mom.

Mom open opened the door.

At last, Caillou find found the sock in the basket.

After I read this book, I lose socks very often, so I understood Caillou's feelings.

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Score: A-

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Tips):

1. 문법 및 표현 수정:

   • "wear" → "wore" (과거형 사용)
   • "find" → "found" (과거형 사용)
   • "another one was gone" → "The other one was gone" ("another" 대신 "the other" 사용)
   • "go" → "went" (과거형 사용)
   • "wasn't here" → "wasn't there" ("here"보다는 "there"가 더 적절)
   • "go to the another room" → "went to another room" (the 제거)
   • "call" → "called" (과거형 사용)
   • "finding" → "searched for" (문법 오류 수정)
   • "open" → "opened" (과거형 사용)
   • 마지막 문장: "I lost the socks very much" → "I lose socks very often" (자연스러운 표현)

2. 추가 내용 추천:

   • Caillou가 양말을 찾았을 때 기뻤는지, 어떤 표정을 지었는지 추가하면 더 재미있어요!
   • 아빠와 엄마가 도와주는 과정에서 Caillou가 어떤 감정을 느꼈는지도 표현해보면 좋아요.