Re: Caillou현우

[Teacher1]

Caillou went to his parents' room and checked if their his parents were sleeping.
Caillou had just woke woken up and was very hungry.
Caillou decided to make breakfast for himself.
Caillou had an idea. Caillou would prepare breakfast for his parents.
Caillou would give milk to his brother, feed Gilbert, and prepare his father's favorite a muffin muffin and his mather mother’s favorite cereal.
Caillou shook his plate in the middle, but Caillou successfully prepared the breakfast.

I think Caillou is cute.

Score: A-

Tips)

1. "그의 부모님"은 "their parents"가 아니라 "his parents"가 맞아요.
2. "막 일어났다"는 "had just woke up"이 아니라 "had just woken up"이라고 써야 해요.
3. "아빠가 좋아하는 머핀"은 "a muffin"이 아니라 "muffin"이라고 써야 해요.
4. "엄마"의 철자는 "mather"가 아니라 "mother"예요.
5. "아침을 준비했다"는 "the breakfast"가 아니라 그냥 "breakfast"라고 하면 더 자연스러워요.