(Chun Hyo Ye - The Lands of Bok Changhan)
1. Appearance
Your pronunciation of this is a bit unclear.
Just think it as " Appear + Ance ".
If you listen this, you can recognize what I am saying.
↓ Naver dictionary's one (that I made it slower) ↓
appearance slower.wma
2. A diligent scholar, ~
I could not hear the ending sound of " Diligent ".
3. Examination
As before I mentioned Friday, "I" pronunciation is different with korean “ 이 ”.
( " I " can not be found in korean sound!
It can be heard like " 으 ", " 어 ", and “ 에 ”...etc)
So you should take care not to pronunciate Exa"미"nation.
Furthermore, “ Examination ” has a specific rhythm like E!xA!miN!ation
you shoud give more accent on E A N.
↓ check this one and mimic it! ↓
examination.wma
4. When he was serving as a junior officer, ~
I could not hear "V" sound in " Serving "
5. Exile
Your pronunciation is like Exel.
Sound "IL" pronunciation correctly.
It should be similar with " Milk "'s "IL" sound.
6. The state awarded his lands to kwon ~
" Awarded "'s "R" sound is weak.
7. Several
Your pronunciation of this is a bit unclear.
Just think it as " Sever + Al ".
If you listen this, you can recognize what I am saying.
↓ merriam dictionary's one (that I made it slower) ↓
several slower.wma
8. And he returned to serve in an official role. ~
You made wrong accent in " Official ".
(Not " Official ", but " oFFicial ".)
9. Inventory
It contains a bit of Busan dialect, and is weak in " V " sound.
10. I harvested the crops that grew on your land, ~
" Land "'s "L" sound is heard like "R" sound.
11. Rhythm
Rhythm is a bit unstable.
It's like you are concerning too much during the presentation.
I recommend you to maintain stable rhythm, although If you face some words which are difficult to pronunciate for you.
Bolt, thank you for your sincere effort and confidence.
And also thank you for that you controlled the camcorder instead of me.
I was really impressed by your brief intro, because I could recognize your skillful presentation manner.
I hope you to keep going on like this!
Have a nice day!
첫댓글 Wow... Amaizingly thank u for your effort. It is more than useful . I promise u to enter every Friday's Eupphony for improving my pronunciation and presentation