Re: Read it unit 4 (Jia)

[Teacher Winget]

The title of this unit is "Emotional Eating and How to Beat It."
According to this story, emotional eating is bad because it is harmful to our physical and mental health. So, we have to reduce emotional eating. When I got get stressed, I want to ice cream want ice cream.
But it is bad because I have a cold.
And I reccommend recommend that if you got get stressed, try doing yoga, reading a book, or doing another activity to help relieve stress. Then your stress is get out will go away.
If you don’t feel like doing an activity, I recommend that you fall asleep try to get some sleep.

Score: B+

Tips)

1. 문법: "got stress" 대신 "get stressed"라고 해야 하고, "want to ice cream" 대신 "want ice cream"이라고 해야 자연스러워요.
2. 내용 추가: "왜 감정적 섭식이 해로운지 더 설명해 보세요. 예를 들어, 기분을 더 나쁘게 만들 수 있기 때문이에요!"