Re: Max and Ruby / Albert

[Teacher Winget]

The title of this story is "Max Misses the Bus."

Ruby have to go has to go to her friend's house.

But Max didin't didn't want to go and he wants wanted to stay home.

So Ruby packed up Max's rocket toy and leave left for her friend's house.

But Max still wants wanted to stay home.

Max play played again with his other toy.

Then Ruby packed up many of Max's toy toys.

Her friend was watting waiting for her at her house.

But Max didn't wants want to leave his house.

So Ruby missed the last bus.

But her friend came to Ruby's house.

So Max play played, and stayed home.

I think Max is mischief mischievous.

Grade: B

Tips:

1. Use correct verb tenses: Ensure that all verbs are in the past tense where appropriate.
2. Correct spelling errors: Fix "didin't" to "didn't," "wants" to "wanted," "leave" to "left," "play" to "played," "toy" to "toys," "watting" to "waiting," and "mischief" to "mischievous."
3. Use proper articles and prepositions: Add "to" after "has to go" and "at" after "waiting for her."