The title of this story is "Max's Halloween." This book is directed by Jamie Whitney.
Max and Ruby was were going to their grandmother's house with Louise because it was Halloween. Ruby wanted to dress up a as a beautiful princess. Meanwhile, despite Ruby's continued emphasis on transforming into a little prince, Max wanted to become a vampire. Eventually, Max dressed up as a vampire and headed to his grandmother's house to do a go trick-or-treating with Louise. Even along the way, Louise and Ruby said Max would feel scray to scare their grandmother. But when they arrived, Grandma was dressed up as a vampire with spiders!
In my opinion, grandmother is very funn fun because she dressed up as a vampire just like Max!
Grade: A-
Tips:
- Ensure subject-verb agreement (Max and Ruby were instead of Max and Ruby was).
- Use correct prepositions and articles (as a beautiful princess, go trick-or-treating).
- Correct spelling and grammar errors (scary instead of scray, fun instead of funn).