<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 200%"><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT face="맑은 고딕" color=#000000><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Gulim">toeic writing test 준비하고 있습니다. 영어초보라 혼자 첨삭하기가 힘드네요. </SPAN></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 200%"><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT face="맑은 고딕" color=#000000><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Gulim">첨삭 부탁드릴게요. </SPAN></FONT></SPAN></P>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 200%"><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT face="맑은 고딕" color=#000000><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Gulim">Dear sir,</SPAN></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 200%"><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT face="맑은 고딕" color=#000000><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Gulim">Hello I’m Kevin share, manager of A.A construction. I just receive your blue print. It was very impressed me because it was very convinience design for construction. However it has some problems. First of all, It would be need to much money. We just have 900,000 dollor for construction but your plan may be spend more money. Also, the pblue plint was pland to use stone but I want it will be made by wood, because its name is “Westwood house”. Therefore I appreciate it, if you will modificate blue print. Please call me back soon. My number is 123-4567. </SPAN></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 200%"><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT face="맑은 고딕" color=#000000><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Gulim">Sincerely,</SPAN></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 200%"><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT color=#000000><FONT face="맑은 고딕"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Gulim">Kevin share. </SPAN><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Gulim"> </SPAN></SPAN></FONT></FONT></SPAN></P>
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<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 200%"><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT face="맑은 고딕" color=#000000><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Gulim">Dear Mike hannah,</SPAN></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 200%"><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT color=#000000><FONT face="맑은 고딕"><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Gulim"> </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Gulim">Hello, I’m Jenny Kang, staff of accounting department. I just receive your E-mail and I feel excited position. I want to work as a sale manager. </SPAN><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Gulim"> </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Gulim">I have many experience regarding sale manager. Last year, I was sale manager of Hyundai department store and nowdays I attend sale manager club. Also, I graduated economic class 5years ago. So I have many knowledge about sale manager. If You will look up my resume, you may know My qualification. By the way I have one question regarding application. When I attend interviewing?</SPAN><SPAN style="mso-spacerun: yes"><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Gulim"> </SPAN></SPAN><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Gulim">I appreciate if you tell me about this. My number is 122-3456. Please call me back soon.</SPAN></FONT></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 200%"><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT face="맑은 고딕" color=#000000><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Gulim">Sincerely, </SPAN></FONT></SPAN></P>
<P class=MsoNormal style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 200%"><SPAN lang=EN-US><FONT face="맑은 고딕" color=#000000><SPAN style="FONT-FAMILY: Gulim">Jenny Kang.</SPAN></FONT></SPAN></P>
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