<p>The poor father gave <b>three gifts</b> <b><s>for her three sons</s></b> <b>to his three sons</b> before he died. They traveled <b><s>aaround the word</s></b> <b>around the world</b> to get rich after their <b><s>faher</s></b> <b>father</b> died.</p><p>The first son got <b><s>the treasure bg using he millstone to chase away from their treasure</s></b> <b>treasure by using his millstone to chase away thieves</b>.</p><p>The second son <b><s>posed like skeleton</s></b> <b>pretended to be a skeleton</b> by using a gourd and some twigs. He <b><s>got a soul by the goblin nd restored back to the women</s></b> <b>captured a soul from a goblin and returned it to a woman</b>. He got <b><s>the half of her father's fortune</s></b> <b>half of her father's fortune</b>.</p><p>The youngest son made a tiger dance by <b><s>plying</s></b> <b>playing</b> the drum. He and the tiger became so famous that they performed in front of the king. The youngest <b><s>man got a numeroous money</s></b> <b>son earned a large amount of money</b>.</p><p>All of the sons met and heard each other's stories. I'm so impressed that a small thing can bring priceless results.</p><p>Score: <b>A-</b></p><p><b>Tips)</b></p><ol style="list-style-type: decimal;" data-ke-list-type="decimal"><li><b>문법</b>: "for her three sons" 대신 "to his three sons"라고 해야 하고, "aaround the word" 대신 "around the world"라고 해야 자연스럽습니다.</li><li><b>내용 추가</b>: 각 아들이 어떻게 지혜롭게 선물을 사용했는지 설명을 더 추가해 보세요.</li></ol>
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