Ep.1 Max's Halloween
Max and Ruby prepare prepared to welcome Louise at home.
Ruby was dressed up as Cinderella and Max decided to play The Little Prince dressed up as The Little Prince, but Max wanted to dress up a as a vampire.
And ruby Ruby didn't want to miss any snacks.
Louis Louise dressed up as Panjel an Angel. And When she was surprised to see Max dressed as a Louise vampire a vampire, Ruby sighed.
And Then they went to get candy from their grandmother. And They were surprised to see their grandmother.
That's because grandmother their grandmother dressed up as a vampire.
Grade: B
Tips:
- Ensure proper capitalization and punctuation.
- Correct character names (Louise instead of Louis).
- Correct spelling and ensure clarity (Angel instead of Panjel).
- Ensure subject consistency (their grandmother instead of just grandmother).