Re: Read it 9 summary Ruby

[Sub tutor 1]

This story is about the history of birthdays.

First, The the first birthday celebrations took place in Egypt.

Next, Egyptians believed pharaohs god pharaohs were gods, so they celebrated their birthdays.

Then, The ancient Greek the ancient Greeks also celebrated the birth of their gods.

Next that After that, the Greeks backed baked moon-shaped cakes for their goddess.

Then, the Romans were celebrate celebrated with their family and friends.

In the end, German families held birthday parties for children.

This called was called Kinderfeste.

I think this story was interesting.

Score: B+

Tips)

• Greeks는 사람들을 말할 때 -s를 붙여요.
• baked가 맞는 철자예요. (backed ❌)
• was called는 "~라고 불렸다"라는 뜻이에요.
• 이집트 사람들은 파라오가 신이 되었다고 믿었어요. 그래서 생일을 축하했어요.