Today, I will introduce a Max and Ruby story.
On Halloween, Max and Ruby were getting ready to meet Louise at home. They dressed up and got ready to meet her. Ruby was Cinderella and Max was a little prince. But Max wanted to be a vampire. Ruby wanted candy, too. So they met and went to get the candy from their grandmother. But the grandmother was in disguise, so they were horrified.
First story is finish so l introduce about this second story
This is the end of the first story. Now, I will introduce the second story.
Grade: B
Tips):
- Use complete sentences and avoid starting sentences with "But" unless it follows another sentence.
- Use proper punctuation and capitalization.
- Make sure each sentence is clear and flows well.
- Add more details to make the story more interesting.