<p><br></p><p><iframe id="v95b8HmzRNRpH8CRNMRN8mC@my" width="640" height="360" src="https://kakaotv.daum.net/embed/player/cliplink/v95b8HmzRNRpH8CRNMRN8mC@my?service=daum_cafe&ptoken=v2_72b90e0128e1a54f73dffbdd66eaa4febc231367087ef7e0e9b5a6ef6e28ecd160dbf87250f9c93508ad4ea971f6c5401301558dc7be59a23db601bc" frameborder="0" scrolling="no" allowfullscreen></iframe></p><p><font color="#000000" face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt; text-indent: 10pt; tab-stops: 127.6pt; mso-char-indent-count: 1.0;"><span ><font color="#000000" face="맑은 고딕" size="2">Hello this is Denver</font></span></p><p><font color="#000000" face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt; text-indent: 9.75pt; tab-stops: 127.6pt 351.75pt;"><span ><font color="#000000" face="맑은 고딕" size="2">First and for most, thank you for attending Friday Euphony class. I
am exceedingly delighted to see you in my Friday euphony class. </font></span></p><p><font color="#000000" face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt; tab-stops: 127.6pt;"><span ><font size="2"><font face="맑은 고딕"><font color="#000000">I deeply moved by
your hard work and perseverance for studying English. I firmly believe that if
you keep making a presentation in Friday euphony class on every single week, it
will pay off improving your presentation skill as well as English ability.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></font></font></font></span></p><p><font color="#000000"><font face="굴림" size="3">
</font><span style='line-height: 115%; font-family: "맑은 고딕"; font-size: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; ; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-bidi-theme-font: minor-bidi; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: KO; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;'>While I watching your video clip, I could see your
pain staking effort for this performance. However, still it has a room for
improvement. I would like to give you several feedbacks in the hope of your
advancement. </span></font></p><p><br></p><font color="#000000"><p><br></p><span style='line-height: 115%; font-family: "맑은 고딕"; font-size: 10pt; mso-bidi-font-family: "Times New Roman"; ; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-fareast-theme-font: minor-fareast; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-bidi-theme-font: minor-bidi; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: KO; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA;'><p><font face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="line-height: 115%; font-size: 18pt; ;">Pronunciation
</span></b></p><p><font face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;"><span style="line-height: 115%; ;">Pen[i]nsula – it is sound like [</span><span style="line-height: 115%; ;">ㅣ<span >] not [</span>ㅔ<span >]</span></span></p><p><font face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;"><span style="line-height: 115%; ;">Neighb[o]ring – pronounce [o] more close to [</span><span style="line-height: 115%; ;">ㅓ<span >], rather
than [</span>ㅗ<span >]</span></span></p><p><font face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;"><span style="line-height: 115%; ;">Min[i]ster – here [i] is more closed to [</span><span style="line-height: 115%; ;">ㅓ<span >] than [</span>ㅣ<span >]</span></span></p><p><font face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;"><span style="line-height: 115%; ;">Approxim[a]tely – it is sound like [</span><span style="line-height: 115%; ;">ㅓ<span >] not [</span>ㅣ<span >]</span></span></p><p><font face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;"><span style="line-height: 115%; ;">Peace[f]ul – [F] sound was a bit weak</span></p><p><font face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;"><span style="line-height: 115%; ;">[V]illage i- [V] sound was a bit weak, make more vibration on
your lips with your front tooth</span></p><p><font face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="line-height: 115%; font-size: 18pt; ;">Ending
sound</span></b></p><p><font face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;"><span style="line-height: 115%; ;">Referr<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="color: red;">[ed]</span></b></span></p><p><font face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;"><span style="line-height: 115%; ;">Roof<b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="color: red;">[ed]</span></b><span style="color: red;"> </span></span></p><p><font face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="line-height: 115%; font-size: 18pt; ;">Intonation
& stress</span></b></p><p><font face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;"><span style="line-height: 115%; ;">O</span><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="line-height: 115%; font-size: 11pt; ;">[ri]</span></b><span style="line-height: 115%; ;">ginally – put
more stress on [ri], you can check this sound through </span><span ><a href="http://www.m-w.com/"><span style="line-height: 115%; ;"><u><font color="#0000ff">www.m-w.com</font></u></span></a></span></p><p><font face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;"><span style="line-height: 115%; ;">I hope you to try to mimic exactly same with sound file. It
will help you to improve you monotonous intonation and weak accent.<span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span></span></p><p><font face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="line-height: 115%; font-size: 18pt; ;">Tone of
voice & manner</span></b></p><p><font face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;"><span style="line-height: 115%; ;">Your tone of voice is calm and comfortable to listen as an audience.
If you prepare your presentation more thoroughly, I am sure that your speech
would be more look professional and compelling.</span></p><p><font face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="line-height: 115%; font-size: 18pt; ;">Mission </span></b></p><p><font face="굴림" size="3">
<br></font></p><p style="margin: 0cm 0cm 10pt;"><span style="line-height: 115%; ;">Following sound file</span></p><p><font face="굴림" size="3">
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첫댓글 Denver~ thank you for your effort