<p>The title of this book is "The Traveler's Just Reward." A tiger**, ** <s>and</s> a snake, and a goldsmith promised <s>to rescue</s> <b>a reward after being rescued</b>. A tiger gave <s>hime</s> <b>him</b> <s>a present to</s> <b>a</b> necklace. <s>So,</s> <b>The goldsmith</b> <s>he</s> recognized <b>it</b> and <s>reward to</s> <b>betrayed</b> <b>the</b> tiger. <s>Some</s> <b>The</b> traveler was captured and <s>imprison ed</s> <b>imprisoned</b> and <s>received a reward to travelers</s> <b>needed help</b>. <s>So they heared it and</s> <b>When the</b> snake <s>depressed and feel</s> <b>heard this, she felt</b> awful. However**,** the king <s>recount</s> <b>heard about</b> his journey and <b>the goldsmith was</b> executed for failing to repay a good deed.</p><p>Grade: B-</p><p>Tips)</p><ul style="list-style-type: disc;" data-ke-list-type="disc"><li>문장을 더 짧게 나누어 써보세요.</li><li>금세공인이 어떻게 배신했는지 설명해보세요.</li><li>뱀은 어떻게 도와주었나요?</li><li>이야기의 교훈을 써보면 좋겠어요.</li><li>시제를 잘 지켜서 써보세요 (현재형/과거형).</li></ul>
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