[Corrected] Love actually is all around !

[Jim Lee]

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I saw a movie – “ Love actually “ with my friend. As I got an good impression by a few reviews on this movie, I've expected to seeing it since the first run. This movie was as warm as spring’s sunlight, and made us pleasant. It wakened us to the value and the significance of a love. The Christmas as a background of this movie made our mind wander. Yes, I’m already waiting for the Christmas. Different couples showed how to make their love, how beautiful it is. Different episodes were well spread. Main actors and actress – Hugh Grant, Emma Tompson, Liam Nissen, Bill Naighee,etc put in splendid acting. The appearance of big stars like Lowan Atkinson and Claudia Chiffer gave an unlooked-for happiness For about 2 hours, a showing time, I smiled, laughed heartily. I was happy and drenched with tears. Have you seen this movie ? If not, I love to recommend you. Of course, take a handkerchief. A main theme in this movie ; " love actually is all around " was well sketched. Maybe, my love will appear sooner or later ?	I saw a movie – “ Love actually “ with my friend. As I got an good impression from by a few reviews on this movie, I've been looking forward to expected to seeing it ever since it the first premiered run. This movie was as warm as spring’s sunlight, and made us feel pleasant. It awakened us to the value and the significance of a love. The Christmas as a background of this movie made our minds wander. Yes, I’m already waiting for the Christmas. Different couples showed how to make their love, and how beautiful it is. Different episodes were well spread out throughout the movie. Main actors and actresses – Hugh Grant, Emma Tompson, Liam Nissen, Bill Naighee, etc displayed put in splendid acting abilities. The appearance of big stars like Lowan Atkinson and Claudia CSchiffer gave an [unlooked-for happiness]?? For about 2 hours, the actual a showing running time of this movie, I smiled, laughed heartily. I was happy and drenched with tears. Have you seen this movie ? If not, I love to recommend it to you. Of course, take a handkerchief with you. The A main theme in this movie ; " love actually is all around " was well sketched. Maybe, my love will appear sooner than I am thinking of  or maybe later ?
Comment: Excellent writing!  You are a superb writer.  However, I changed some parts to make it flow a little better.  Take a look at my corrections and see what I have changed.  There was one part where I did not understand you.  I marked it [ ].   Personal comment: Christmas is a time when lovers display their love for each other.  And, single people feel lonely and long for someone.  However, if you keep a positive mind and concentrate on what you have to do, your love will soon appear.  This is from my experience in life.  :-)

[ollipo]

1) Unlooked-for happiness what you marked means by unexpected happiness. 2) Yes, whenever you correct my writing, I read line by line not to repeat the similar errors and improve my writing skill. You're right. I'll try to think over the flow of sentences at writing.