Re: Read it unit 7- Olivia

[Teacher Winget]

The title of this story is "How October Became the Tenth Month."
This story is an informative international text and provides me with new information.

According to this story, October was eighth month was the eighth month but became the tenth month because January and February were added to the calendar later.
That's why October means 'eight' in the Latin number Latin.

I wonder why Jauary January and February were added to the calendar later.
I also wonder why months are named after people like gods and kings.

If I were to make a calendar, I would make new names for the months give the months new names.

Score: A-

Tips)

1. 문법: "was eighth month" 대신 "was the eighth month," "Jauary" 대신 "January"라고 해야 자연스럽습니다.
2. 내용 추가: "January와 February가 왜 후에 추가되었는지, 그리고 새로운 이름을 만들면 어떤 기준으로 정할 것인지 더 자세히 설명해 보세요!"