Re: Kyle-1B062

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Why the Sea is Salty

Years ago, there was a king who had a hand mill with special powers.
One day, a man decided that he would steal it.
The man spent a long time for steal trying to steal it.
"I will sneak in during the night," the man thought.
He found the hand mill beside the throne and stole it.
He quickly ran back to the wall boat.
The man got on a boat to escape.
"I will hide in my home town hometown to avoid getting in trouble," He he thought.
The man sat in the boat and thought about what he would wish for.
"I wish for salt," He he told the hand mill. He turned the handle and thought.
The man was so excited when salt came out that he dropped the hand mill into the sea.

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Score: B+Tips)

1. "for steal" → "trying to steal" ("trying to"는 "무엇을 하려고 노력하다"는 뜻이죠!)
2. "wall" → "boat" (도망가는 장면에선 "boat"가 맞아요.)
3. "home town" → "hometown" ("hometown"은 하나의 단어입니다.)
4. "He" → "he" (문장 중간에는 소문자를 써야 합니다.)