<p><br></p><p><iframe id="v0a58qAshGyGNhyDhyycARq@my" width="640" height="360" src="https://kakaotv.daum.net/embed/player/cliplink/v0a58qAshGyGNhyDhyycARq@my?service=daum_cafe&ptoken=v2_b5d6fddfa3e80d78ca7e092399f072e90f1580b600972286b718b444dc97f79ea8fb3ad8db81f7dc5852209584fcfa485f5976235e04c4f80320e19a" frameborder="0" scrolling="no" allowfullscreen></iframe></p><p><b style="font-size: 9pt; line-height: 1.6;"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;;line-height:115%; color:white;background:red">Hello! Gleen!!</span></b><b style="font-size: 9pt; line-height: 1.6;"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;; line-height:115%;color:white"> </span></b><b style="font-size: 9pt; line-height: 1.6;"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;;line-height:115%">This
is smile driven guy Dane! :) Welcome to Friday Euphony class.</span></b></p><p><b style="font-size: 9pt; line-height: 1.6;"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;;line-height:115%">Thank you for
giving me a chance to watch your performance in the class. Also, I am keenly
aware of the fact that you put tremendous effort to perform this presentation</span></b><span style="font-size: 9pt; line-height: 1.6; font-family: 'Times New Roman', serif;">. </span><b style="font-size: 9pt; line-height: 1.6;"><span style="font-size:12.0pt;;line-height:115%">While
you delivered your presentation, I saw your potential room for improvement in
terms of pronunciation, ending sound and mission. For your better performance,
I would like to give you feedback regarding your performance.</span></b><br></p><div style="mso-element:para-border-div;border:none black 1.0pt;mso-border-alt: none black 0cm;padding:1.0pt 4.0pt 1.0pt 4.0pt">
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<p><b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;;line-height:115%">[Pronunciation]</span></b><b><span style="font-size:14.0pt; ;line-height:115%"> </span></b></p>
<p><span style="font-size:14.0pt;;line-height:115%">(If you are not sure about the sound of any word of
its kind, I recommend that make a visit to the following website,</span></p>
<p><span><a href="http://www.merrian-webster.com/"><span style="font-size:14.0pt;;line-height:115%">http://www.merriam-webster.com</span></a></span><span style="font-size:14.0pt;;line-height:115%">
)</span></p>
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<p><b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;;line-height:115%">There is
nothing to point out!! Excellent work Gleen! :)</span></b></p>
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<p><b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;;line-height:115%">[Ending sound]</span></b><b><span style="font-size:14.0pt; ;line-height:115%"> </span></b></p><p><br></p>
<p><b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;;line-height:115%">There is
nothing to point out!! Excellent work Gleen! :)</span></b></p>
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<p><b><span style="font-size:18.0pt;;line-height:115%">[Mission]</span></b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;;line-height:115%">
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<p class="MsoTitle" style="margin-left:0cm;text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph; text-indent:0cm;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;;line-height:115%">Gleen! Your
great performance gives me a feeling as if I was listening real Chung Hyo YE
audio pile. Amazing! But I want to say that why don’t you try put more stress
on sentence by sentence for better performance? If you follow my mission, it
will be your pretty strong merits ^^ </span></b></p><p class="MsoTitle" style="margin-left:0cm;text-align:justify;text-justify:inter-ideograph; text-indent:0cm;mso-list:l0 level1 lfo1"><b><span style="font-size:14.0pt;;line-height:115%"><br></span></b></p>
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<p><b><span style="font-size:12.0pt;;line-height:115%">My sincere
hope is that these comments above help you become a better presenter. If you
need my helping hand, feel free to contact me whenever you want ^^ one again,
thank you for coming to Dane’s Friday Euphony class! keep your momentum going
:) </span></b></p>
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첫댓글 Thank you profusely Dane~~!!!\^_^/