My Great Family Summer
Vacation Trip
I went to the camping
with my family two weeks ago.
We went to the Taean.
There is a beach in
Taean.
The beach is near from
the camping ground, and we played in the beach all day.
It was not very hot.
It was cool.
or The weather
was not very hot, it was cool.
We did camping for two
nights and three days.
I was really excited.
We ate so delicious
foods.
We ate shrimps, pork
belly and spicy grilled chicken.
It tastes very great,
My mom is very good in cooking.
great. My or great ; My
I love my mom’s
food.
We swam at the beach.
The wave was big and
strong.
I surfed with the
swimming tube.
It was fun.
The sea water was
cold, so I forgot the heat.
There are so many
clams, hermit crabs, and small fishes in the sand.
My father and my sister caught the small
spipefish.
The color was silver and there is a sharp and
long stick in the mouth.
was
The fish has unique appearance.
had a unique
We caught the fishes,
clams, and crabs.
It was wonderful experience!
a wonderful
I think I can’t forget the trip.
It was my great summer
vacation family trip!
family summer vacation
trip
Comment
Thank you for sharing your family summer
vacation trip Candy. I can sense that your summer vacation was really great.
You are such a family oriented person because you
are proud of your mother's cooking and you enjoy being with them. You are
very detailed in writing the events happened during your
summer
vacation, but be careful always in using the correct tenses of
the verb. Keep up the good work Candy!